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Remember ...
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
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One night u wont sleep
One night u cant sleep
Another night they don’t let u sleep
One night u sleep happily
One night u sleep bothered
Another night u have sex
One night feels so hot
One night feels so cold
But remember
One day u will never wake !
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2003-07-20 19:05:00]
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Re: Remember ...
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:18:45 PM AEST
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quite profound
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Re: Remember ...
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by cant-skate on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:19:19 PM AEST
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| This poem is in the memory of someone who slept and never woke up after several nights where pain didnt allow him to sleep! so i feel that this poem is more than a poem its a stat ! |
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Re: Remember ...
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by Saira on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:31:38 PM AEST
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Short but very good!
Saira
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Re: Remember ...
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by Kimmie_mac on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 03:44:58 AM AEST
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Short but true. I like this. I cherish every birthday because if there is no more than that means that I am no more. So bring on the birthdays.
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