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Suicide Awareness
Contributed by
norm
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Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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It was Wednesday I am speaking of, Mike and I showed early,
He told me of a kid he had, a three year baby girly.
It happened many years before, he no longer wonders why,
I had never heard before, the baby girl did die.
They took her to a hospital where baby deaths are rife,
Where little can be done for kids to save their little life.
As he told me of this awful tale, a thought occured to me,
Why not, instead of suicide, let selfish kids go see.
Go volunteer and see if they can help these kids along,
Let the babies' final days be happiness and song.
The suicides can do their act, using gun or rope
As soon as these kid's doctors, run out of any hope.
There is a possibility the suicides will see,
How fragile, for some people, a full happy life can be.
Their thinking can become adult and find that life has worth
The only thing a pre-death does is rob them of their birth.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-07-20 10:05:00]
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by Kimmie_mac on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 10:31:57 AM AEST
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This is a great poem and oh, so true,
All they are thinking is that they are blue.
If they would only realize that it will soon past by,
They will no longer want to die.
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 11:16:14 AM AEST
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IF ONLY THEY COULD REALIZE THAT NO MATTER HOW BAD THINGS SEEM FOR YOU .THERE IS ALWAYS SOMEBODY SOME WHERE WORSE OFF THAN YOU. AND IF THEY CAN MAKE SO CAN YOU. THERE IS SO MUCH THAT PRAY CAN DO,WHAT GOD HAS DONE FOR OTHERS SURLEY HE CAN DO FOR YOU TO.
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 11:50:23 AM AEST
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good idea maybe by helping someone it will make them feel better about themselves
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by shelby on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 12:46:11 PM AEST
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beautiful poem here Norm and yes i agree if maybe they were faced with anothers immortality it would bring a light to their own life.
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by PoloRM on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 12:48:26 PM AEST
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To throw my life away
Is something I’d never do
I’m only sixteen you see,
I’d like to see it through.
Crushed I’ve been and crushed I’ll be
The hurt I have is a growing tree.
But Hope always calls out for me
And I know one day I will break free.
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by Saira on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 06:17:59 PM AEST
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Norm this is a remarkable poem. I hope everyone reads it and spread the message it carries. Beautiful as always!
Saira |
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by krystal on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:25:27 AM AEST
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| norm this is utterly fantastic. What a beautiful and truthful insight you have wrote within your words. At the times when we are the lowest we feel that noone could possibly be worse off than us, but if faced directly with another's situation it just may show them how very precious life really is. Norm this is a fabulous write and so very much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing it with us all. |
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by tinka_belle on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 08:07:39 AM AEST
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this is such a beautiful
inspiring poem
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Re: Suicide Awareness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 02:26:29 PM AEST
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Very emotional and inspiring.Judging by some of the comments your message hit home. I enjoyed.
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