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Incestuous
Contributed by
daniel
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Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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come back for more!
this is the way!
now you know what this is for
and you know all the things to say!
here is the door!
come on it's yours!
the situation has moved beyond
all the things you did before
not going down that way with you some more
the door to head on out has swung wide
some more....
no more....
open walk on through to this
when the end already left!
now there's nothing left to do
but this place i'll check!
substance...
some meaning...
the epitaph the epitaph the epitaph
the epitaph is looking right at me
not going down that way with you anymore
the door to head on out has swung by
anymore...
no more...
oh man i'd love to...
but speak in this time and i'm above you...
in all of my sequence...
in my silence, silence, silence...
well going down there with you once more
looks to happen there's no door this time
once more...
no more...
oh man i'd love to...
i'd love you to speak because then i'm right above you...
in all of my substance...
in my silent little sequence...
special...
seperate...
alone! alone! alone! alone...
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-07-20 07:05:00]
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Re: Incestuous
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 08:49:11 AM AEST
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Umm, alright. This is well written Danny but I'm not too sure I understand it.... ??
~Dani :)
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Re: Incestuous
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 09:14:10 AM AEST
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I agree..well written but I am confused
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Re: Incestuous
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by shelby on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
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well written but Im not sure, maybe your asking someone to leave your life?Caught up between you going or them going then changing your minds?Not sure let me know.
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Re: Incestuous
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by Daniel on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 02:08:05 AM AEST
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| think about the title a bit, read it again and try to read into it this time! tell me YOUR interpretation. kudos! |
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