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please come home mum

Contributed by babe_alert_4eva on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Its just another day alone at home
Another day that you’ve kicked me off the phone.
What did I ever do to you
Did I make you angry, sad or blue
If I did im really sorry for my mistakes
For swearing, getting violent, or keeping you awake.
But that doesn’t matter anymore
For you have left and shut the door.
I always tell you to go away
But really I want you here to stay,
But when I don’t want to around,
That's when you’re always to be found.
Why cant I ever get it right,
Its that why you sneek out at night?
I know im not pleasant to be around
You want me dead, buried in the ground.
Its that why I hate myself so much
Because my mum cant handle me or my touch.
You’ve just notice that I act like a disobedient child
That's because my mum cant even handle looking at me smile
you don’t notice it now but you will one day
that all you had to do to change it was stay
Did you ever hear me cry myself to sleep
Did you ever come in just to take a peep?
What am I on about you where never there
All I would do all night was sit and steer
I don’t want you to feel guilty or in pain
But with out a mother I felt insane.
I’ve wanted to kill myself because of you
But don’t feel guilty, it was cause of love to.
I wanted and thought I would be a vet
I even made a promise and had a bet,
But you never had much faith me
But I don’t need you, you wait and see!!




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Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 02:53:56 AM AEST
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Great write. Don't give up hope, life will smile to you one day. ;)

Cheers,
PoloRM


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 03:15:13 AM AEST
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Things will get better. I came from h*** and back and things just couldn't be better. Good poem and good luck. Kimmie_mac


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 03:29:21 AM AEST
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My mother hated me from the day I was born. You must listen carefully when I tell you this is NOT your fault. You can't make people love you, and there is just one person that you can change and that is you! Accept the fact that your mother is your mother because that is her name. If she were your real mother she would have loved you, and comforted you, and cared for you!
She's very sick, but you aren't! And don't ever let her actions take away the love in your heart!
I know. I'm 66 years young, and it took me 55 years to understand that it wasn't my fault!
Beautiful beautiful poem. I could empathize with you on every word!. I love you, and it's NOTYOURFAULT! always remember that!
lovingcritters
with warm love
csz1914@msn.com


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 03:48:18 AM AEST
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Great write!!!! But follow the advice given here... and don't ever stop writing..you are very talented..also...it helps the pain..when you write about it..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:04:45 AM AEST
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Very emotional write! Im very sad to read these words,knowing how alone you must feel without a mothers love.I have 5 kids and cant imagine not loving them..Oh sure lol..they tick me off at times but love is forever.Just remember that no matter what..you are still a star..Dont let someone elses horrible ways make you fade..Just keep shining as your talent for writing does.(((huggers)))


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 12:41:43 PM AEST
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You have a talent, and writing is great therapy, just know the problem is not you, my husbands mother has resented him from birth, it is her not him, just as it is her not you. Believe in yourself you can make a better way.
PM me if you need to talk
Shari


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 04:54:26 PM AEST
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ah, beautiful...i know exactly how you feel...but remember, what doesn't kill us makes us stronger, my mum is like this to me and every word in this poem is so true...show her what you can do yeah? you are talented, and you can go far, don't let her bring you down, you're better than that...prove her wrong...


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 06:41:37 PM AEST
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Warm welcome to YPDC!
I will agree with all here. May God be with you in every path of your life and I pray everything will happen for your good and betterment only. God bless you!
This is a very heart touching write. Shows your talent. Keep up the good work!
Saira


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 01:41:56 AM AEST
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well done, hang in there, honey, and warm welcome to ypdc, hugs n' love nessa


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by babe_alert_4eva on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:47:54 AM AEST
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thanks so much for ya kind words you have no idea how much they mean to me.
the thing about my poem is my mum is neva home and my brother hits me and when i tell mum she dont believe me or she takes his side and that i deserve it. i no i dont and my friends soport me in everyway there is and i thank thenm for it.
for example my brother came at me the other day with a knife to cut my face but i put my hand up and it cut my hand he done it coz im only allowed on the phone from 4:30 till 5:30 and it was 7pm so yea!!!!


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by babe_alert_4eva on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:48:57 AM AEST
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thanks so much for ya kind words you have no idea how much they mean to me.
the thing about my poem is my mum is neva home and my brother hits me and when i tell mum she dont believe me or she takes his side and that i deserve it. i no i dont and my friends soport me in everyway there is and i thank thenm for it.
for example my brother came at me the other day with a knife to cut my face but i put my hand up and it cut my hand he done it coz im only allowed on the phone from 4:30 till 5:30 and it was 7pm so yea!!!!


Re: please come home mum (User Rating: 1 )
by babe_alert_4eva on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:50:13 AM AEST
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thanks so much for ya kind words you have no idea how much they mean to me.
the thing about my poem is my mum is neva home and my brother hits me and when i tell mum she dont believe me or she takes his side and that i deserve it. i no i dont and my friends soport me in everyway there is and i thank thenm for it.
for example my brother came at me the other day with a knife to cut my face but i put my hand up and it cut my hand he done it coz im only allowed on the phone from 4:30 till 5:30 and it was 7pm so yea!!!!




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