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With Thyme in Your Garden
Contributed by
chuckx
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Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I notice your garden
now that summer is here
now that I know you had been there
tilling the earth with your fingers
fingerprinted for eternity in my heart,
when in "A Brief History of Thyme",
I had fallen in love with you
and time stood still.
I crash into your life in a single wave
clinging to the shore
but bound by the tide
and in my hope to secure you
the shattered treasure of my heart
is cast upon the beach
leaving my print for a moment
but washed by the next wave.
I can’t find my way into your life
from the shore of my regret
to your garden on the corner lot
and I’ve dropped my heart
somewhere in-between
broken in a sparkle coloring my poetry
and I can’t seem to find it
though I have all the time in the world.
Copyright ©
chuckx
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2003-07-20 01:35:00]
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Re: With Thyme in Your Garden
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 02:03:14 AM AEST
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Lovely write, Chuckx...great use of metaphors..
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Re: With Thyme in Your Garden
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 03:39:37 AM AEST
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Your words were a delight chuckx, but please find your heart and courage...then go to that corner lot, you have all the time in the world!
Wonderful write.
Enjoyed every moment of it!
loving critters
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Re: With Thyme in Your Garden
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:12:59 AM AEST
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| *sniff* Not sure why but this one brought a tear.Its just so tender.. ***drool*** lol |
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