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cruying my rain
Contributed by
wassim
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i am cruying my rain
suffering the fire pain
every drop going fain
eveng out of vain
explode out of reality
it became a atom trajedy
i couldin't feel my heart or see
it's going into the love history
stored in my heart where you can be
locked up emotions but you have the key
come back to me
enough this it's painfull not lovley
the distance never matters
we can be best lovers
just like the others
sharing love and never bothers
steps in the life taking covers
can you eveng feel my sol
ript off and allways fall
thinking about every word there all
they where more then gold
but my shape you have stoled
so scared and feeling cold
not a single emotion still stored
couldin't go on without this
get off my heart pain what is this
i'm denied with blue lips
it really hurt me deeper then any feeling
it was totaly choking and breathing
i was tossed out with blooding
craked up and nervous beating
but i will never forget you
i'm still loving you
be my girl and i will do the same to
Copyright ©
wassim
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2003-07-19 17:05:00]
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Re: cruying my rain
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:41:56 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is really, really good...sad...i love it though... |
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Re: cruying my rain
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by Saira on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:55:06 PM AEST
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So much pain and full of sadness...feelings so vivid. Good work!
Saira |
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