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A dark Fairytale
Contributed by
dreadfulsuicide1570
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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once upon a time
there was a lonely girl
and behind her loney eyes
there was a beautiful smile
her soul was full of heartache
and her heart full of pain
one day she fell in love
and she let herself become too nieve
his love was too sweet
it hurt her soul
cause she couldnt let go
all the walls were caving in
and she couldnt stop her suffering
once upon a time
there was a lonely girl
who took her life one day
she didnt think his love wa there
so she ended the stoory her way
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2003-07-19 12:05:00]
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Re: A dark Fairytale
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:26:02 PM AEST
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| wow another excellent poem... but so sad... you are a great poet who has been through hard times... if u ever want to talk u can pm me... anyways this poem expressed a lot of your feelings and its good that you can share them here ~Apryl |
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Re: A dark Fairytale
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:18:08 PM AEST
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well written but too bad she ended the story so soon...for around the bend may have been someone more true
Shari |
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Re: A dark Fairytale
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by Crow on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 12:42:55 AM AEST
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| such a sad write, Crow |
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