|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Remembering
Contributed by
crow
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Some nights I come home
with a tear for strangers.
Sitting by a window
wandering around the quiet
daydreaming of the lives
that were torn to pieces in an instant.
The beauty once witnessed
never to be recovered.
Memories to hold
a tearful laugh remembering good.
Wandering around the dark
so late at night, a tear might fall
for the ones I loved......waiting for light
remembering. Crow
[things I see in the dead of Night]
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2003-07-19 11:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:52:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very touching write
Shari |
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:04:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Sad. Great poem. Kimmie_mac |
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:03:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nicely written ... sad, but thoughtful ... Jan |
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:10:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
insightful poem with a touch of sadness
michelle |
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:04:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| excellent, great images! i love this time of night best too:) hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 12:59:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
yesss..the things you must see :( Pre-dawn hours......so quiet and yet full of sound.....a lil like silent screams yet the stillness is more peaceful.
You ahve a way about your writing that really makes the reader become involved. :) |
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 12:01:53 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is s beautiful, Crow... Shows what a special person you must be...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Remembering
(User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:23:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Such an exquisite write. I really liked it Crow...feel the same. Thanks!
Saira |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
