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Dying for Peace
Contributed by
POOBEAR
on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 12:37:14 PM in AEST
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Sadness and frustration crash into me.
I can't seem to cry hard enough,
to create an outlet for them to escape.
Addictive behavior takes the wheel.
No plan, just acting on impulse.
Slam my head into the wall,
trying to dislodge the thoughts,
that cling to every opening
of my mind.
My hand grabs a generous serving
of pills.
The wine does not compliment
the bitterness.
I draw deeply on a cigarette.
It seems as if it is the best
smoke I have ever had.
I am becoming numb now
and I don't miss feeling.
Not really thinking about dying.
Just dying to live in peace.
Copyright ©
POOBEAR
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2002-08-09 12:37:14]
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Re: Dying for Peace
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 02:43:23 PM AEST
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My favorite part of this poem was its last two lines. You've summed up everything that anyone has ever wanted in 2 lines... Great write!
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Re: Dying for Peace
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by humphdj on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM AEST
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Last two lines did it for me as well.
Great write
Rgds
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