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Lost At The In-And-About.
Contributed by
2timesX
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Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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people went in and out.
i was left.
people went to and fro.
i was last.
people went here and there
i was lost.
i was on-gaurd;
forgotten in the end.
all that was left.
the last one.
i was lost.
i was lost.
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2003-07-19 07:35:00]
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Re: Lost At The In-And-About.
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 12:10:03 AM AEST
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| i have a couple of thoughts, i`m wondering what yours were. "standing guard" gives me the feeling of what could come with involvement. Crow |
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Re: Lost At The In-And-About.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:16:27 AM AEST
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| hmm, hey this is flatlandbob1, from this poem I get the feeling that you feel ignored in life, like people are there yet they don't pay attention to you. But you make mention of "the end" when you have so much of life left, you can't predict the future that things will always be the same, otherwise you face the chance of becoming a self-fulfilling prophecy. |
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