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Contributed by
LadyDama
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Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You bite me
With minced words
Vinegar kisses
From angry lips
You hurt me
With unkind stares
Flaccid embraces
From indifferent arms
You confuse me
With biased tones
Bittersweet pinches
From accusing fingers
You gouge me
With hateful thoughts
Puncturing dialogue
From uncaring eyes
You ignore me
With stubborn images
Ice-cold responses
From unforgiving tongues
You sadden me
With blunt statements
Tainted voices
From unyielding hearts
(you love me
or so you say you do)
7-9-2003
Copyright ©
LadyDama
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2003-07-19 05:35:00]
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Re: ouch
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:41:00 AM AEST
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| very painful my dear friend..venkat |
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Re: ouch
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by krystal on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:06:21 AM AEST
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| Ouch indeed, yet through your pain you wrote about it so 'beautifully'...I can remember a time when I too had someone who made me feel this way...he said he loved me (along with every other woman). I moved on from him and the pain, and I am a much better person because of it. Thank you for sharing, I truly enjoyed this wonderful write... |
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Re: ouch
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:29:29 AM AEST
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Yep, been there. You explain it well.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: ouch
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:50:01 AM AEST
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| Excellent write ... I relate to this so well ... Jan |
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Re: ouch
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:42:53 AM AEST
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This makes me sad. I know these feelings well. Your to sweet for this kind of treatment!! If you need to talk pm me or email ok?(Ill send you more furbaby pictures to give you a smile k?)
michelle |
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Re: ouch
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:32:22 AM AEST
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| great write, but awww!! big warm hug!!! love nessa |
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Re: ouch
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:08:50 AM AEST
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Oh Michele, will we ever see you again?
Not this you, but the one we used to know
This poem is tragic,painful, but not without your consumate skill
I came looking for you, miss you, hope things get better
bob |
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