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Heartburn
Contributed by
chard
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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In the beginning, I was willing.
To be the man.
Willing to understand,
your, Venus language.
I covered you with blankets, when you fell out, without preparation.
Your lips, sweet, I kissed.
Slow with the motion's in my ocean.
For me, slow you creammmmmm...
Keep in your dome, the name you moaned,
over the stove, over dirty clothes, over the kitchen table, top of the bedroom bureau.
I Didn't call you a whore, when I destroyed your void in my 99 Accord.
Instead I adored and held you more.
After I got the a**, you thought I would hit the door.
Never to return any of your,
Phony phone calls from a part time lover.
I opened for you like I have for no other.
Now I've sealed the steel doors and locked the shutters!!!!
No other have I opened for, like I did for you.
Copyright ©
chard
... [
2003-07-19 05:05:00]
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Re: Heartburn
(User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:22:51 AM AEST
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| Man, I'm not sure whether to say good for you your in love, or MAN YOUR HORNY.Heh, keep up the good writing I liked it a lot. |
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Re: Heartburn
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by full_blur on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 08:27:58 PM AEST
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| well, you definitely took a provocative subject and wrote about it in a beautiful style... good stuff! |
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