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subtle pushing
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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if You hate me
let me go
if it’s over
say it’s so
if You can’t
take one more day
then pack my bags
no more play
if You like me
we’ll be friends
if You care
we’ll meet the ends
if You can
still smile at me
we’ll raise our daughter
separately
if You love me
You must act fast
don’t let me leave
please make this last
for once I’m gone
I’m gone for good
You know this well
You know I could
(You helped me the last time
You know I would)
7/14/03
Copyright ©
LadyDama
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2003-07-19 04:35:00]
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Re: subtle pushing
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:39:46 AM AEST
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| Life is always a play of light and shadows.. wish you the best. venkat |
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Re: subtle pushing
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by Asatru on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:27:29 AM AEST
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| Real good write. Hope you both raise the child, It's real hard without a father in your life. Peace be with you. |
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Re: subtle pushing
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:45:11 AM AEST
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I hope things work out in the manner thats best for you and your happiness !!
michelle |
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Re: subtle pushing
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:36:18 PM AEST
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| this is really good...sad...i hope it works out :) |
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Re: subtle pushing
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 10:38:11 PM AEST
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| awww, i hope all works out for you, this seems a determined and positive poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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