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Red Pool
Contributed by
unholy_soldier
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Falling away from all that hold me so tight,
With you I fight only hopeing what I do is right,
With open veins and a closed fist I see the light,
Bleeding out my rage, what did you ever see in me,
Something? This cannot be all I see is me,
With the red pool flooding to the floor this you must ignore,
For once you see, the hurt is no longer with me,
Watch me put an end to what I hate,
This if my fate,
Your tears are to late.
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unholy_soldier
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2003-07-19 03:05:00]
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Re: Red Pool
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:24:24 AM AEST
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wow, this is amazing..
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Re: Red Pool
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by Asatru on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:36:53 AM AEST
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| man, this poem hits me real hard. Tonight I wrote and submitted a poem about a girl I talked to about an hour and a half ago, she slit her wristis while I was talking to her... I couldn't help it at all. Read it if you want it'll be on within a day or so, it's called "On The Other Side Of The Screen #1" |
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Re: Red Pool
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:14:39 PM AEST
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Re: Red Pool
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by Unholy_Soldier on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 02:48:39 AM AEST
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| I'm feeling a bit depressed, Family issues are pushing down on me. Should my the love of my life leave, takeing my little girl away from me as she walks with her back turned . this Poem will become a reality. |
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