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LAST CRY!
Contributed by
lovingangel4u
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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WHAT ARE THE SCREAMS AND YELLING I HEAR?
I DON’T KNOW WHAT’S GOING ON AROUND HERE.
WHERE IS MY MUM I JUST NEED HER ARMS
I NEED HER TO FEEL THE CALM.
I CRY I’M SCARED MUM WHERE ARE YOU?
WHO’S ROUGH HANDS DO I FEEL?
HELP! HELP! I SCREAM FOR YOU.
IS THIS A DREAM OR FOR REAL?
THE WATER IS SO COLD
MY BREATH I CAN’T HOLD.
WHO’S FACE IS THIS CLOUDED BY WATER?
IT’S THE KILLER THE KILLER OF YOUR DAUGTHER.
Copyright ©
lovingangel4u
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2003-07-19 02:05:00]
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Re: LAST CRY!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:22:16 AM AEST
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| I just watched a real tear jerking movie that made me cry and i thought that before i read this poem i was over my tears but this made me cry all over again. A beautiful, tear jerking write. Unfortunatly it is so true in todays society. |
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Re: LAST CRY!
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by outsider on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:55:47 AM AEST
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| You've created such a vivid write here, the last line hits so powerfully. Really very impressive. |
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