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I'M AN M&M HAT!
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I'm a M&M Hat!
I was born in a Grocery Store.
What do you think about that?
All alone, I had to endure,
I wasn't lonely, until I saw her!
Wearing another baseball hat,
Then I knew, she'd have to try me on!
Perched upon her head,
My loneliness & sadness, were all gone!
I could feel how very much she loved me!
For she never left me behind!
I felt like a Queen sitting on her throne!
One lady even offered her money....
She said, "No I won't be left alone!"
Bright yellow make-up...
With different colored M&M's!
carefully placed, row by row,
adorn my cheeks, such a nice warm glow!
Everyone complimented me,
And passed me all around.
They all agreed,
I was the most unique hat....
They'd ever found!
Accidentally I was placed in a sack,
And mistakenly carried to the attic.
I was missing for two whole years.
She was lonely, we both shed tears.
A young man I knew,
Began to clean my residency.
Oh, how I hope he wouldn't miss me!
Alas.....he looked in my sack.
I heard him say, "You're M&M hat is back!"
Our reunion was a "tearful Joy!"
Thanks to that wonderful young boy!
She placed me upon her head.
She was so glad to have me back,
She was even going to wear me to bed!
I was place on her nightstand, instead!
She's far more than just a "head" to me
Why, we fit together like crumpets & tea.
There'll be no more sacks, forever more!!
Even if I was born in a Grocery Store!
I collect baseball hats...this one is my favorite!
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lovingcritters
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2003-07-18 22:05:00]
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Re: I'M AN M&M HAT!
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by Saira on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 10:47:50 PM AEST
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Wow! This is great. You wrote brilliantly on a very unique and nice subject. Striking imagery. I could feel the joy and then sorrow of being lost for a while of the M&M hat. Good work!
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Re: I'M AN M&M HAT!
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:10:12 PM AEST
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good write, I am glad you found your hat
Shari |
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Re: I'M AN M&M HAT!
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:56:16 PM AEST
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| very original and cute!! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I'M AN M&M HAT!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:54:32 AM AEST
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Aww this is so lovely..well done.... I'm happy for you....
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Re: I'M AN M&M HAT!
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:55:52 AM AEST
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LOl I love this you have a very creative talent here.Im glad you found your hat. The wind caught my hat and blew it far away, it was a bummer of a day!!
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