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Freak!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 12:33:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So you think I’m a freak
Is this why you won't speak
Not a note or a call
Now my head thumps the wall
Yes I made the mistake
Thinking this love was just fake
Your comfort was my dream
Filled with passion we would steam
For now your memory’s gone
From whence I was the one
I don’t want to be set free
From your dreams about me
But it’s not so long now
I showed you just how
And when they arrive
You’ll remember I’m alive
Ever closer draws the day
When they’ll whisk us away
I explained so you know
To our home we will go
Please love try to find
Who I was in your mind
Ever growing more weak
Cos you think I’m a freak!
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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2002-08-09 12:33:28]
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Re: Freak!
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:01:39 PM AEST
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Dean, I think that this is really good. I like it. Sorry, no really deep thoughts right now, I have been up all night writing. And I am really tried. But what can you do, when inspiration hits you. You have to go with it.
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Re: Freak!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 11:11:47 PM AEST
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That was Ok Candice,
I do understand how it is! And thankyou for taking the time to comment, it is much appreciated.
With love
Dean:-) |
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