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once upon a flea
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
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once upon a time there was a black bee
who lived within' a raintree
and dwelled in the south seas,
this right next to a tall cashew tree
where lived a pretty butter bee
who spent time drinking honey tea,
{life was happy}
then one day from far upon the high seas
moving to a big shaded bushy tree
came along a pirate flea,
{his name was henri}
said pretty butter bee to best friend black bee
"oh no! this flea may steal all my yummy honey tea!"
said black bee,"quick! let's hide in the carob tree!"
{and off they fled quickly!}
muttered henri pirate flea,"what ever has gotton into me?"
"me thinks i need the azure abyss of deep blue sea."
so went flea to fire tree, carrying off a pretty sand flea,
{her name was rose marie}
sand flea said exitedly,"oh! no! no! not me!"
"least not without my crystal for brie!"
henri sighed a longgg sigh, "oh, gee..."
{children: 103}
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
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2003-07-18 16:05:00]
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Saira on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 05:02:03 PM AEST
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This is sooo sweet. Enjoyed reading it a lot. I will save it for my nephew to read :o) Thanks.
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 05:04:37 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this, Lady.. Enjoyed it a lot.
Hugs from a friend. |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:08:32 PM AEST
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*Smiles* It's good to read another of your silly poems. This is good, and you know it.
Cudos for being silly!
*J* |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:10:45 PM AEST
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Oh lordy, that was like a tonguetwister in my head, lol. Very cute though. :P
~ Moonlit |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 07:57:43 PM AEST
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An adorable poem I just loved it!
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 09:44:12 PM AEST
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lighthearted and very good
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Re: once upon a flea
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:00:44 PM AEST
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| Silly but love it,Always like these kind of poems! So cute! Christina |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 12:46:11 AM AEST
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Your a wonderful poet, and this poem is no differant, great write, I only wish I could get inspired once again so that I could write again. Thank you for being a great friend. Hugs from me to you. much love.
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:20:17 AM AEST
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| great flattery..it doesn't suit you phantom. |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:25:47 AM AEST
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| LOL...I will print this to read to my littlin's when they return from holidays...***huge smiles** (((huggers))) too xx |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 03:49:01 AM AEST
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Little poem for children.. so sweet Nessa..
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Re: once upon a flea
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by aernby on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:49:32 AM AEST
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three cheers for silly!
good write
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Re: once upon a flea
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:58:16 AM AEST
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| to guest, you have no right nor any invitation to be rude to my dear friend phantom, he is a wonderful person, and a caring one; unlike yourself. |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:02:50 AM AEST
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ahhhh how cute Im gonna print this out to read to a certain little cowboy named Colson who is on his way back home as we speak he will love this as did I.
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Re: once upon a flea
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 12:27:23 PM AEST
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This is a very cute enjoyable read. I love it.
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Re: once upon a flea
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by norm on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:27:50 PM AEST
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nessa, what you've done to me
I now accept a drinking bee
I now accept a rose marie
My mind is going..hehehe
A pirate who's name is henery
I'm gone around the bend, you seeeee...
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Bongo on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 12:53:09 PM AEST
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Fell out of my tree
Reading this poetry
Now i'm scratching bad
Hon, you are mad
Who is this woman
I take to my bosom
Ah....Its poet Ness
I surely bless
But fleas and bees
What were you thinking....please |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 07:54:03 PM AEST
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| This tore me up with laughter. Great job! Nothing like a good laugh! |
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Re: once upon a flea
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 11:16:37 PM AEST
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Looking through your poems, this is the first I opened. The title made me do it :))!
I really would love to hear that you have performed this poem in public, from memory....with a cast and props! What an excellent story line...you would have them rolling in the aisles! Only a short piece to read but my guess it would take about 5-10 mins. to perform. Well done.
Twinkletoes! |
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