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It was all a dream
Contributed by
joe
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Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I held you tight - And smelt you hair
When we kissed all night - And our feelings we shared
It was all a dream - When I saw your eyes and that hint of love - A shade of desire - I we would - Fall so deep - Completely covered - By unreal love - As forever together
If it was all a dream - Then when did I awake
I wish I never had - Maybe then my heart wouldn't of had to break
But now I see - It never will be - The way it once was...'Cause it was all a dream.
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2003-07-18 09:35:00]
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Re: It was all a dream
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 05:07:33 PM AEST
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Re: It was all a dream
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by Saira on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:16:36 PM AEST
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Aww...dreams, dreams and dreams(sigh).Very nicely done. Keep up the good work!
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Re: It was all a dream
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 06:29:17 PM AEST
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Hi Joe, this is very good,just remember dreams are future event.
good write. |
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