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UNHOOK ME, MY DEAR
Contributed by
Del
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Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Now that you caught me hook, line and sinker,
Why are you being such a hell of a stinker?
You said you would be here tonight around eight.
Just how long do you expect me to wait?
The time right now is ten fifteen.
Darling, how could you be so mean?
Then when I see you, what do I get?
A lot of excuses that to me are all wet.
You are still the only one I adore,
But, you just don't seem to love me no more.
I gave you all the love I possess,
Supposedly giving you great happiness.
All those nights of love we shared,
Made me feel you really cared.
If you want to throw me back into the sea
Unhook me, my dear, and let me be free.
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Del
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2003-07-18 00:05:00]
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Re: UNHOOK ME, MY DEAR
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 04:18:49 AM AEST
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| well said, and it rhymed too. good job. |
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Re: UNHOOK ME, MY DEAR
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by MisterRight on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 03:35:27 PM AEST
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Great write, I've been hooked the same way.
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