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Your Tattoo has Faded
Contributed by
eyesrustedshut
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I've erased these marks you left on my soul
These scribblings I once thought made me whole
Every memory we had is now gone
Replaced by the love of another one
Her I'll keep close and she'll lead my way
These cherry lips will lure me to her each day
I'll never worry if she stays out late
She's never given me a reason to be in that state
So mark on someone else with your evil ink
Try not to see my face every time you blink
I've already forgotten why I thought you were so rare
You're a dime a dozen, only a nickel to share
Copyright ©
eyesrustedshut
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2003-07-17 22:25:00]
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Re: Your Tattoo has Faded
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:50:33 PM AEST
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| Interesting concept here... :) |
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Re: Your Tattoo has Faded
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 07:35:06 PM AEST
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| simple rhyme scheme and form but a very effective idea and way of expressing yourself. keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: Your Tattoo has Faded
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 09:04:06 AM AEST
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I related to this one, a good write
Shari |
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Re: Your Tattoo has Faded
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 11:28:30 AM AEST
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| Defiantly a new approach but it drew me in. Such a simple rhyme scheme but made the poem all the better. Nicely done. -Amy |
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