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ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
Contributed by
vincy
on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Too many things to do
when you
waking up to the
vacuuuuuuuuuuume
surrounding the nucleus
of your being
set aside the dreams
that only moments ago
were part of your being,
snort twice
turn arrrrrrroooooooound
you beast
you ungrateful,
you undevoted
thing to your past!
You angel...
you unresentful
you unregretable
you creature
of the time being you.
Who may I be
to pass judgement
but the echo
which strikes twice
and once again
and again..
till you turn
to the other side,
there... you see
you do not snort no more.
Wrapped as you are
with sorrow and solitude
well disguised
in pearls & rubies.
Busy.. buzzzzzy ...
always almost
carrying messages
of faith and glory
from times past
to times to come.
No more to say
not much to do
but snore again
as aging wings
armfuls of them
from me to you.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-07-17 20:05:00]
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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:52:15 PM AEST
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interesting write
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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
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by krystal on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 10:09:38 AM AEST
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| vincy you have such a wonderfully interesting imagination... your poems leave me feeling so light hearted, with usually a smile... thank you for sharing the gift of your mind |
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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
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by Saira on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 07:54:32 PM AEST
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Vincy you sure do have a great way with words. I like your poems. Good work!
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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
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by norm on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 08:24:15 PM AEST
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To try to understand what happened
I might be right or it's way too deep,
You were wakened by a vacume noise
and ultimately you went back to sleep.
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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
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by buchi on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:00:48 PM AEST
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| Words speak!!! Awesome... |
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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
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by jono on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 01:12:58 AM AEST
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I like the way you make a great poem out of something simple like sleeping
good poem best wishes
John
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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz
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by Errious on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:23:38 AM AEST
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Wow! a fantastic use of contrast.
Like it!
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