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crushed and crumbeled
Contributed by
wassim
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i have beng crushed and crumbeled
tears falling down walking forward
didin't care didin't eveng bothered
my shadow from fear i have covered
i was a little stovered
needing love i really do care
hitting the walls it wasin't fare
old memories that i use to chare
i was going to the black lare
my fear i neeted to waste and prepare
come back with no fear
i really neeted you right here
to take out from my heart that spear
i can feel you know very near
one step far away
every moment in every day
in insachable feelings with every way
i allways used to pray
i have a lot of things to say
i am waiting for my girl
let our love on furle
at the cloud number 4
i can't resist you
that if you loved me 2
eveng if you didin't i will allways do
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2003-07-17 17:35:00]
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Re: crushed and crumbeled
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by Lia on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:59:49 PM AEST
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| i like this...has a really good meaning behind it..correct the spelling errors and you'll have a really nice poem here. |
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Re: crushed and crumbeled
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:02:43 PM AEST
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it speaks volumes
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