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LIFE
Contributed by
monk
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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LIFE a slow and painful death. We can only catch our breath in time for our life to be spade. Like the promises made that only paid a small piece of joy. Like a small child with a toy that will only put a smile on the childs face. We go at a fast pace only to slow down with a frown. Anger, Hate, Raceism, Bigetry and Death these are why we do not have much life before death. Our life is breif. Like a fall leaf that starts to change its colors. All the others are not the same. We all search for fame but never find it. Like a candle lit that only burns out. Just to take a different route to the land of the Dead. LIFE
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2003-07-17 16:05:00]
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Re: LIFE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 05:01:52 PM AEST
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Interesting write...
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Re: LIFE
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by Lia on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:38:00 PM AEST
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Well then...
I must say I disagree with your thinking here. Life isn't just the time spent here on earth..it's all eternity. And how you live it is how you make your choices. Choosing to live in the dark will give you a life without sun. However, this is your opinion and made for an interesting write. |
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Re: LIFE
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:07:57 PM AEST
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thought provoking write I like it
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