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Give A Little
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm alone again
Till I don't know when
Lying in a bed I just can't sleep in without you
What am I supposed to do
When every **** minute feels like an hour
I'll look for a way to get through, I will scour
Well I'm sorry that by keeping you safe
I don't let you have any fun
I'm sorry that you mean something to me
And I'm sorry for what I'll do to get back at you
I'm sorry you made me cry again
I'm sorry I can't help the way I feel
I'm sorry you don't want to be with me tonight
I'm sorry you made me love you
And that I'm not who you thought I would be
You make me want to make this easier on you
Wanna throw it all away and say I'm through
By leaving you alone forever
Till I see you again wherever
But that wouldn't be fair to everyone
Who's never made me feel outdone
And believe me, I'll never put what this has become
Before who I've been since long before you've come
Last night you bled so tonight I'll bleed
And I don't care if you call that greed
You're not the only one who can do stupid things
At least I do it on purpose and it means something
Because what usually makes it go away
Just isn't helping at all today
I guess I don't know how to cope
I guess you'll have to give a little and hope
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-07-17 11:35:00]
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Re: Give A Little
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 01:37:23 PM AEST
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Hmmm I guess you do, grrlfriend.... nice write..
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Re: Give A Little
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:36:04 PM AEST
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Great write!
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Re: Give A Little
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 03:01:02 PM AEST
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| nice poem... |
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Re: Give A Little
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 03:20:42 PM AEST
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| awwww!! big hugs n' love to you, nessa x |
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Re: Give A Little
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:29:41 PM AEST
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well done
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Re: Give A Little
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:44:21 PM AEST
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Awww..Hun..its a male what do you expect? three legged gits most of them...honestly *rolls eyes*
Lots Love 'n Hugs to ya
-Becca |
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Re: Give A Little
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 04:53:22 AM AEST
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| this poem struck me on many levels... it's very aggressive and sad though too... and i feel the pain in the last stanza... keep writing it out... great one here... blessings... michele |
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Re: Give A Little
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:52:52 PM AEST
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Dee, your hurt. Even Tammi says wow. If you ever need me.... you know. I don't even have to tell you.
This is beautiful, and never be sorry, never have regrets, cause they only fill you with doubts.
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Re: Give A Little
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by Trisha on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 05:14:08 AM AEST
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| I love this and it lets you know what youre feel |
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