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LOVE SO RARE
Contributed by
Del
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
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Sweetheart, the love I share with you,
Is so rare, it seems unreal.
I just could never ever explain
Exactly the way I feel.
This love is so very different,
I'm never sad or blue.
I feel so happy every day,
Whenever I think of you.
Something my heart keeps telling me,
'Be careful, keep it cool,
You know this love is not for you,
Don't be a silly fool.'
'But I'm not hurting anyone,'
I talk back to my heart.
'We'll never be together,
We'll always be apart,'
We share our thoughts and feelings,
Each and every day.
I feel you're right besides me,
But you're very far away.
It will never be any different,
But I can't say that I care.
I'll enjoy it while it's here right now,
This very rare love we share.
Copyright ©
Del
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2003-07-17 09:35:00]
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by PoloRM on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:55:53 AM AEST
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I really like the way you put the dialogue in this poem =)
Hope you'll always feel in love!
Cheers,
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by Kimmie_mac on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:08:52 AM AEST
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I like this poem and the way it was written.
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by Sexygirl on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:18:41 AM AEST
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| I like this poem....you have captured the moment well.... |
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by norm on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:26:10 AM AEST
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A happy poem that speaks of love
In poetry land is rare,
I hope this distant love you have
is more than full of air.
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:17:01 PM AEST
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Del, this is absolutely beautiful.... I can identify with a love like this.....
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:14:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful as always.
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:24:59 PM AEST
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| this was a wonderful write! =) |
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Re: LOVE SO RARE
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:39:33 PM AEST
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wonderful
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