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hello
Contributed by
traptedxnxhell
on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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hello
i love you
u hear me
no you dont
im trying to hold you
you see me
no you dont
i wanna be yours
are you listening to me
no your not
please hear me
but you cant
what i feel for you is real
but all you do is walk away
i wanna be your one
but all you do is push me aside
hello
do you hear me
no you dont
im here
listen to me
im here
touch me i wont break
you think im no one
you think i dont exist
but i do im here
and i want to be with you
but all you do is say nothing
your not listening to me
your not showing me love
do you love me too
when you finally answer you say
NO!
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2003-07-17 06:35:00]
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Re: hello
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by Asatru on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:18:22 AM AEST
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| Ah, the inevitable secret crush. Goin through one right now as a matter of fact. Don't know if your too much of friends to act, or not enough. Happened to me twice (that ending). Nice write. |
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Re: hello
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by Sexygirl on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:28:51 AM AEST
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| You can do better....find someone else.....this is well written...remember life is too short ...so get out there...... |
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Re: hello
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 05:38:07 PM AEST
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totally felt your pain. I've been there. But bad things can only get better, am I right? Great writing.
Peace to ya,
JellyBelly |
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