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Collision
Contributed by
jyde
on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Again,at the gate of faith,
consequeces and false conclusion
has brought me back
to the beginning of this race.
how is it that i can make a choice about
my own life and be wrong;
can it be that my mind is forever on
track with the truth like the shadow
behind me but yet,
my mouth seeks the opposite.
how can i speak with this tongue attached
to my body and with it bring harm upon myself
i must save myself from me.
does the man in the mirror agree with the man on the other side?
or is it a plot?
i have just found that the greatest
harm i can incur is the one
i bring upon myself.
breathe again!
Copyright ©
jyde
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2003-07-16 10:35:00]
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Re: Collision
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:17:37 PM AEST
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i liked this
interesting write
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Re: Collision
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:30:06 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this one a lot,
"i have just found that the greatest
harm i can incur is the one
i bring upon myself."
and i agree
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Re: Collision
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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