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mind mystery
Contributed by
jyde
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Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In this vast land of uncountable foot steps,
it is a mystery how he an confidently label himself as significant
this same life that flows through the heart of soo many has privately tutored him.
He is natures friend and i am a relative of circumstance.
I remain in this realm of no doubts.
Where distance of any sort is a step away, Where my dream is a dream away.
This world has taught me that the strongest hate is that which is patient;
Hate that derives pleasure in seeing me crack my biggest smile before bringing me the most heart breaking cry;
One that wants to see me on my greatest day before showing me my worst night.
I pray that you dont experience this kind of hate.
Joy like life,is a gift.
Love is a companion.
Love,always!
Copyright ©
jyde
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2003-07-16 09:35:00]
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Re: mind mystery
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by norm on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 10:27:27 AM AEST
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| What you wrote should be a way of life... |
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Re: mind mystery
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 10:33:53 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem..Love always hate takes too much energy. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: mind mystery
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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| a great poem indeed....glad I read this one |
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Re: mind mystery
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:22:01 PM AEST
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wonderful write,
Shari |
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Re: mind mystery
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by ericool_dude on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:36:58 PM AEST
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| Glad to find some people who feel about the same way that I do about love/hate. Hate leaves you hollow. While it may win you friends, as love will, these are not the friends worth having. Follow the rule that your beliefs are part of you. Wrapping yourself in hate for a certain race, belief, sexual-tendancy, etc usually will show up in other aspects of your life, such as with you family. |
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Re: mind mystery
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 03:25:46 PM AEST
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"strongest hate is patient" how true
nothing more painful than a steep fall
from the tip of the climb to the pit of the fall.
Hate does corrode its' own container first though,
you bring with this poem lots' of benevolance.
peace & love, V. |
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Re: mind mystery
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by stargazer on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:51:50 PM AEST
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Among the few people that understand the emotions of the universe. That was amazing in every aspect! "Joy like life,is a gift." How true is that? I agree 100% with you. Hate leaves a hole, one that can never be replaced. Hate is both patient and angry.... it is always looking to strike. Joy however is a gift, one that you must truely want.
I am very glad I read this poem when I did. It brought a smile to my face.
-Amy
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