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Crying Out With Chastised Hands
Contributed by
blueteelah
on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sheltered child
You live in a house of glass
Innocence can never last
Fragile frame
Bones jut through the skin
Trying to live up to the world's expectations
Is just a sin
Battered one
Where's the love you wish to feel
Time can help those bruises heal
Warped mind
I know it hurts to live
But just remember
You have so much more to give
Addicted body
You need just one more fix
Don't you know your killing yourself
Just for some worthless kicks
Soulful eyes
What have you seen in your long life
Your deep orbs pierce my soul
Like a jagged knife
Pretty girl
Don't you feel some deep need
People think you're invincible
But I know inside you bleed
Hold all the broken ones in your arms today
They need a gift of compassion just to make
it through another day
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blueteelah
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2003-07-16 09:05:00]
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Re: Crying Out With Chastised Hands
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 10:32:15 AM AEST
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An appeal to a person in this condition
is a waste of time and petition,
Clean the mind and clean the soul
This can make a person whole... |
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Re: Crying Out With Chastised Hands
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 07:55:54 PM AEST
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touching and well written
Shari |
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Re: Crying Out With Chastised Hands
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:42:07 AM AEST
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| Great write ... the message came through loud and clear ... well done ... Jan |
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Re: Crying Out With Chastised Hands
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:29:22 PM AEST
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this was an excellent piece.
People think you're invincible
But I know inside you bleed
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