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When You needed me
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When you needed help,
I was helping.
When you needed an ear,
I was listening.
When you needed eyes,
I was looking.
When you needed a shoulder,
You were crying on mine.
When you needed legs,
I was carrying you.
When you need a hug,
I held you in lifes embrace.
When I needed you,
You weren' there.
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2003-07-16 08:05:00]
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Re: When You needed me
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 08:32:12 AM AEST
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| Now that's the truth. Great poem. Kimmie |
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Re: When You needed me
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 08:52:21 AM AEST
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i have been there
Shari |
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Re: When You needed me
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by ericool_dude on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:10:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful and Truthful, a double whammy. I especially liked these lines: When you need a hug,
I held you in lifes embrace.
A bit sad but not too sad, a nice read.
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Re: When You needed me
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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| this is a very good peom. it's true i know what youre talking about |
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Re: When You needed me
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 05:58:23 PM AEST
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| Such a true poem to the trueness of life! Love:::Kirby great poem |
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Re: When You needed me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:38:15 PM AEST
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| great work and so true,when you give someone help,but when you need help there not there. |
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