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SILENT ECHOES
Contributed by
pacific
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Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The words that I utter, in sarcastic critique.
Shall be the pebbles,
on my path of tomorrow.
You do me no wrong, your “mistakes,”
are my own...
reflection.
Mirrored image of verbal deception,
professing my own silent failures.
In this vast expanse, my universe,
let me learn of myself, not at others expense
remembering...
Everything
echoes
me.
-JAKI
Copyright ©
pacific
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2003-07-16 05:35:00]
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Re: SILENT ECHOES
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 06:29:06 AM AEST
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very good
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Re: SILENT ECHOES
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:09:18 PM AEST
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A great write! Keep them coming.
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Re: SILENT ECHOES
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:46:04 PM AEST
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Dear Jaki,
How responsible of you, which is certainly different in this ole world of no responsibltiy at all!
Beautiful poetry.....I understood every word.
Keep those coming. They are delightful and good!
lovingcritters
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Re: SILENT ECHOES
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 11:26:57 PM AEST
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Wonderful words....so full of wisdom!!
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