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Rise Free
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
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Her thoughts to tears
a night born cold
protected thoughts she holds within.
The timid mind will not reveal
a darkened corner, the look inside.
The smallest spark the fire grows
deep within, attending hope
and love in dreams.
Teathers break, the beauty known
Rise Free. Crow
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crow
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2003-07-16 02:05:00]
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Re: Rise Free
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:30:01 AM AEST
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Really beautiful, Crow..
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Re: Rise Free
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by plous on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:41:05 AM AEST
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| yes, i think the same thoughts sometimes. |
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Re: Rise Free
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 04:29:07 AM AEST
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First of all..I love the title :)
Its a scary place,the mind.But when we venture there and stay for a while..things are made seem,lighter,less worriesome.You have captured the freedom well.
**ok ok...so maybe not my mind lol.** |
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Re: Rise Free
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:19:10 AM AEST
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| very well done |
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Re: Rise Free
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by krystal on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 10:40:09 AM AEST
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| Crow this is lovely...so simple yet so complex as our minds can very well be...simply adored this read. Thank you |
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Re: Rise Free
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:54:14 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write!
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