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The Succubus' Visit
Contributed by
norm
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Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
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In the back of my head and down below
Where dreams are stored and ideas flow,
I saw in the dark a maiden fair,
I saw in the dark a maiden there.
She was not chaste for around her waste
She had a gown half falling down,
Plain to see, a maiden she
A stretch of fancy, it would be.
My hand slid downward to her hips
She smiled as I kissed her lips,
I looked into her deep-set eyes
I saw black pits of hate and lies.
I turned away, I felt alarm
I looked back and she was gone.
A succubus did some ugly send,
I wonder who is not my friend?
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Re: The Succubus' Visit
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:23:12 AM AEST
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as always a very good write
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Re: The Succubus' Visit
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:25:13 AM AEST
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Thanks for the smiles, Norm...
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Re: The Succubus' Visit
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by plous on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 02:45:46 AM AEST
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| those are the best kind though. |
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Re: The Succubus' Visit
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 04:51:52 AM AEST
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LOL...where this takes my mind ***rolls eyes***
Very amusing...as always :) |
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Re: The Succubus' Visit
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 03:38:14 PM AEST
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When I was in my teens
there were a lot of them about
After I got married
I began to have a doubt
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Re: The Succubus' Visit
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 07:22:38 PM AEST
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The devil in disguise
we meet eye to eye
so long as we realise
the worst way to die
with such ruthless lies. |
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