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Passion Within Lies
Contributed by
2timesX
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Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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anonymous.
who are you?
lead me to your world,
and then i think i'll know.
laced with lies of smiles and hugs,
because thats how it works.
the world of confusion and bitterness.
the home of all cold hearts.
i'm from the place where no one speaks.
where no one will share a thought,
or even feel a touch.
come take me away.
i like the lies more than you think.
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2timesX
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2003-07-15 20:05:00]
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Re: Passion Within Lies
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:24:57 AM AEST
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| In this poem you resonate the feelings of lying amongst people around you. You can't just expect people to lie to you, some people in this world you can trust. If you get these feelings from your friends, then that isn't good. Also in the end of your poem you made it seem like you accept this lot in life, when you shouldn't accept it, because it isn't what life should be like. |
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Re: Passion Within Lies
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:25:13 AM AEST
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| Hey this is flatlandbob1. In this poem you resonate the feelings of lying amongst people around you. You can't just expect people to lie to you, some people in this world you can trust. If you get these feelings from your friends, then that isn't good. Also in the end of your poem you made it seem like you accept this lot in life, when you shouldn't accept it, because it isn't what life should be like. |
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