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SSSssssssshhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Contributed by
vincy
on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When silence bleeds into itself
squeaking for a way out
yet unable to make the slightest sound
for it is condemned to absolute vacuum
the mighty SSSssssshhhhhhhhhhhh
the prisoner of its own title
when it brakes... it is gone
silence is lost!
When the stone sheds its tears
then shall emerge the fallen one
upon itself who seems to feed
like a snake swallowing its own tail
circled by its own saliva
the spider crying out loud
for its own measure
of pain and pleasure.
When intelligence is an open wound
wisdom be better suited to soothe
when things get out of bound
it is to the poet to make a sound
see you around.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-07-15 18:05:00]
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Re: SSSssssssshhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
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by tinka_belle on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:00:30 PM AEST
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Skillfully written vincy
another enjoyable read |
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Re: SSSssssssshhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
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by PoloRM on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 11:19:34 AM AEST
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| Pretty good poem, I really like it =) The title is somewhat... what got me to read it! hehe. |
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Re: SSSssssssshhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
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by Jacquelynne on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:53:08 AM AEST
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| "measure of pain and pleasure" nice rythmn of words, perfect balance throughout the entire poem, well written. |
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