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Amidst
Contributed by
daniel
on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i know you're coming to beat me from dust to dust
i've gone out of my way to stay away if i must
there's nothing better for me here round this away
there's something holding me back so here i stay
change the scene to excuse it
change it all to just lose it
refuse, to recluse to solitary
as much as it lingers free
rechoose, to reuse the primary
what more is there to torment me?
i know you're coming to feed off me from the crust
i've gone out of my way to leave the leftist lust
well eat the flesh and savour the charred meat again
well drink the juice and swallow the sweetest sin
change the scene to excuse it
change it all to just lose it
refuse, to recluse to tertiary
as much as it lingers free
rechoose, to reuse the binary
what more is there to torment me?
what more is there to torment me?
what more is there to torment me?
you're strange, so very weird
beyond any name, beneath every tear
a grabbing vain, repeats the fear
that's what came, look now it's here
what more is there to torment me?
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-07-15 17:35:00]
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Re: Amidst
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 05:39:17 PM AEST
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Wow this is a dark poem, and well written, i loved it! Great write
Lisa |
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Re: Amidst
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 06:06:19 PM AEST
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wow! now THAT'S definitely dark... almost disturbing... would make one hell of a heavy metal song I think :)
~Dani
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Re: Amidst
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 06:14:52 PM AEST
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| Great poem/song ... I relate to the depth of feeling well ... Jan |
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Re: Amidst
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 06:45:21 PM AEST
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well written
Shari
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Re: Amidst
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:18:13 AM AEST
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| just to let u know, the first comment by me, wasn't actually me, it was my sister Lisa....I'm riki, she was on my account, her name on here is blackfire9786......just to let you know......and i loved your poem as well, dark and well written. -Riki |
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