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Alone
Contributed by
trisha
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Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There You're So Far Away
Seems Like Miles To Get You.
I Come To A Road That's Yellow
Am I Suppose To Follow The Black
Road.
A Minute Goes By Fast
Have To Choose A Road.
Just Don't See AnyThing
You Left BeHide.
There's No Sounds Or Any Signs
To Find You
Seems Like I Am Alone
No Place To Go
Where Can I Go
If I Can't Find You.
Copyright ©
trisha
... [
2003-07-15 15:35:00]
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Re: Alone
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 04:28:11 PM AEST
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Ohh Trish..I do hope you find the road that leads to the one for whom you search..
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Re: Alone
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 04:42:50 PM AEST
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Trisha, I am sure that what ever road you choose it will be the right one.
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Re: Alone
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:31:31 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt write. May whatever you choose the road, would prove to be right for you.
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 04:55:22 AM AEST
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| Hi,,,A very sad thought that you stopped and caught, I like it, both that it's recognized but also a reminder that hope is inside one, not bought. Borrowed , stolen, or foolish thoughts are not sold to you alone, (Catcher in the Rye), and people and not perfect and make honest errors on their own. Yet it's a wise person to realizes not to wander aimlessly,,,,look for the little things, you're too bright to be alone! asax2 Ya-hoo |
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