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Do Not Drink Of My Heart...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I fall silently in the corner,scraping my pain against the wood
Leaving stains of emptiness, from my heart that brings no good
Turning from the memories,facing what must be held for real
Can't take anymore of last goodbyes, or whatever makes me feel
From somewhere calls the deep regret,of ever having dreams
For all my wandering fantasies,have shattered at the seams
Colours spray across the room,and paint a picture of remorse
That's what becomes of a heart,with an ever revolving door
Like a poison I will bring you down,have you doubled up in pain
Though I meant to take it all myself,somehow I still remain
Yet you will fall a thousand deaths,if you should share my wine
But to bring your heart to ruin was never a plan of mine
Crumpled beside me on the floor,lay a hundred thousand words
Some were a feast for hungry eyes,others were for the birds
This room so deathly quiet,as the darkest of pain attacks
I take leave of breath and senses,as my colours all turn black
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LovingWhispers
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2003-07-15 12:05:00]
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Re: Do Not Drink Of My Heart...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:15:10 PM AEST
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Wow..I'm shaking in my boots here!! Great write.
Jenni |
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Re: Do Not Drink Of My Heart...
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by Jenefur on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 01:27:46 PM AEST
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| I don't know what i can say...wow. You should be very proud, thats a great poem. I love it. |
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Re: Do Not Drink Of My Heart...
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 01:55:16 PM AEST
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The thirsty will drink whatever they find!
Sometimes a loving heart is wasted in the rush
during the journey through regret and turmoil.
Potent words lead to vivid imagery,
'revolving door' terrific. |
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Re: Do Not Drink Of My Heart...
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 06:22:50 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem Sharon ... I really fell into these feelings and shed a tear ... Jan :( |
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Re: Do Not Drink Of My Heart...
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 08:23:57 PM AEST
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| never read a dark poem from you, great work.Crow |
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