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Broken trust
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
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It's gry skies to a girl in a town where the sun shines every day
her days drop down because to her, life is no longer worth living.
The girl cries herself to sleep thinking of her problems
her mom has left her, her grades are bad, her friends don't like her.
people are mean and she has given up.
Her parents have stopped caring, her teachers have stopped trying and she has dropped out!
drugs have consumed her life and peer pressure takes the lead!
She finally makes a choice and it is to take her own life.
She walks down the dark narrow street as people pass her and whisper.
She comes to a bend in the road.
there is two paths, one means early death,
the ohter is forgiveness and faith.
Yet this girl thinks her dreams are shattered and her hope is broken,
She takes the path of life and she learns with every breathe, she learns.
she knows no matter how much people or life lets you down, you must not quit, life holds little surprises.
she learns that the wall she built so strong nd secure can be knocked down with the lightest touch.
but through all that hurt and pain she knows:
SOME ONE LOVES HER!!!!!!
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Re: Broken trust
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by Saira on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:28:03 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC :-)
This is a great write. Well done!
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Re: Broken trust
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:15:09 PM AEST
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| i like this, very good job Crow |
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Re: Broken trust
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:32:40 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Broken trust
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:29:54 PM AEST
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Interesting write.... enjoyed this...
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Re: Broken trust
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 02:14:50 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written with so much compassion. |
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Re: Broken trust
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by hope on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 01:04:31 AM AEST
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Very nice...its so hard to overcome pains of the past...beautiful write.
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