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Who I Am
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
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Who I Am
I am Patricia and Bob's granddaughter
Lorraine,is the name of my mother
I never even really knew my father
To know me he didn't even bother
Carl, is the name of my brand new step-dad
He's the best man my mom's ever had
One day I might just call him dad
On that day he'd be oh so glad
Blonde, is the color of my hair
Eyes, let's see, oh yeah I have a blue pair
Changing hues of blue with my mood, blue gray you'd better beware
Want to cut my hair, don't you even dare
I'm in love with a man who's really swell
But my love for him I can't seem to tell
Since I met him, it seems like I've been under his spell
Did I mention that my last name is Bell
Backstreet Boys is my favorite boy band
On a date, what could be better than
Going to the beach and walking hand in hand in the sand
My skin is oh so beautifully tanned
My mom is where I got my looks
What I can't live with out is books books books
Mom and I are good cooks
When we go fishing we never forget the hooks
I love to ride horses and that's no sham
I think the cutest baby animal is the lamb
I love photography and I always say yes ma'am
All of this is who I am
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Re: Who I Am
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by Saira on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:42:10 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Good work!
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Re: Who I Am
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:18:24 PM AEST
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| very good work, Crow |
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Re: Who I Am
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:01:48 PM AEST
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The title is great, the poem very descriptive, indeed, I really do know who you are now.
Nicely done.
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Re: Who I Am
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:35:10 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Who I Am
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:01:52 AM AEST
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| This is really good and that's cool how you made this up |
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Re: Who I Am
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 01:23:33 PM AEST
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Excellent again Candice,
So this is who you are! I was just wondering, only kiddin'.
The cutest baby animal though I must disagree, surely it's a baby Elephant (although this would be hard to rhyme)! Now they're seriously cute.
Apart from that I enjoyed this one very much, thankyou for sharing yourself with us.
With love
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Re: Who I Am
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 11:58:49 PM AEST
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Dean, I'm glad that you like this. And yes baby elephants are very cute. I also thing that a baby monkey is cute as well. Actually I like all baby animals.
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