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A Bunch Of Flowers
Contributed by
Sanju
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
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oops
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Hustled, prodded and packed
Like a flock of sheep
Into the long, narrow aisle of a jetliner
They queue up to their assigned seats
Fighting time, grime and excess baggage
All sense of this mad rush
Will soon be washed down with immodest sips of beer,
All explanations brushed aside-
Like the smooth-scented paper napkins
Dispensed to preserve what little there is left
Of human company.
Suddenly in the midst of it all,
Somebody soundlessly wafts into the picture
In a rain of glances.
Hugging a bunch of flowers to her bosom,
She glides down the aisle
Coolly conscious of the confusion around her
Sheltered in the eye of a storm
She slips in and out of the crowd
Expertly shielding her prized possession
From the relentless onslaught of pressing bodies:
Ah, somewhere somebody is waiting. Somebody out of sync
With metallic blasts of jet-rock. Somebody who cares.
Copyright ©
Sanju
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2003-07-14 16:35:00]
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:52:23 PM AEST
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marvelous, Sonju. The Bible says that in the last days of this system, the "love" of the greater number will cool off!
your poem dipicts those feelings perfectly.
Well written, easy to understand and see in a person's "Mind's Eye!" Among all those passengers, surely there is someone that cares, Just one!
Really enjoyed it, Sonju, you are a crafter of words, and should write more and more.
Lovingcritters
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:23:25 PM AEST
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| very nice poem, it brightened my day a bit. Crow |
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:37:12 PM AEST
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wonderful, uplifting
Shari |
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 03:00:01 AM AEST
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| Welcome Sanju..A beautiful picture you have drawn in this poem.. so lovely write. venkat |
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by Sanju on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:39:35 AM AEST
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Thankyou, You have been most generous in your praise.
Thanks a lot. Sanju. |
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by Sanju on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:42:36 AM AEST
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| Thanks a pile, friend. With best wishes |
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by Sanju on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:44:56 AM AEST
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Thanks. Sure am glad that you liked it.
with regards |
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Re: A Bunch Of Flowers
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by Sanju on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:49:13 AM AEST
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| Thanks Venkat .You have been most encouraging. |
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