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No More
Contributed by
krazed_AnGeL101
on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No more hopes and no more crying,
Just the empty pain of trying.
You live, you love, your heart gets broken.
You learn to take it as Life's twisted token.
A tortured love, A twisted fate,
You live to learn, You learn to hate.
No more tears on Life's endless stream,
No more love in Life's endless dream.
No more dreams of joy and happiness,
All that's left is deceit and worthlessness.
The world is dark and cold and gray,
Nothing to do but kneel and pray.
Pray when it's over you'll come out on top,
And all the bottled up pain will leave or stop.
Love has left as chances are taken,
And Love's good intentions are always mistaken.
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2003-07-14 09:35:00]
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Re: No More
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:40:44 AM AEST
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| I like the way this was written, like a drummer on a norse ship banin away it gets accross the inevitability of it well |
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Re: No More
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by evil_demon on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:28:33 PM AEST
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| This is so true nice job |
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Re: No More
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 02:29:12 AM AEST
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You have red mine I have red yours........Yet I find you have beautiful way with words, where as sadness is only in mine.
Keep up the execellent poetry, so that I may stop by and read from time to time. |
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Re: No More
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:16:50 AM AEST
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| it does seem to be that way, good write Crow |
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