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SANATORIUM
Contributed by
pacific
on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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All to often
time eludes us;
graves are dug
before their time.
Minds are jailed
in tombs of madness
never too forget...
Words unspoken,
faces touched,
lips of colour
once embraced;
bodies, wrapped
in lust and longing,
an interlude
in needless haste
all now lost...
Just shattered pieces
of what was once,
supposed life
whispers now, distorted figures,
no beauty fills these halls
of pain.
Minds of regret,
watch walls
in blankness, wondering
if only........
-pacific
Copyright ©
pacific
... [
2003-07-14 05:35:00]
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Re: SANATORIUM
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:38:11 AM AEST
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well written
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Re: SANATORIUM
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:41:29 AM AEST
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nice and true, I can relate.
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Re: SANATORIUM
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:44:35 AM AEST
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nice and true, I can relate.
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Re: SANATORIUM
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by Lele on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:25:47 AM AEST
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| nice true, It's a fast related. Good poem. |
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Re: SANATORIUM
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 10:13:55 PM AEST
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Well written...Welcome to ypdc...
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