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Split Finger Hollywood
Contributed by
flirtyrockstar
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
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The room was lit
Like a cold morning
And we acted as gods,
Creating a fog as we parted our lips
We'd just sit
Let the smoke escape
Roll of my tongue in twisting shapes
What elegancy we'd emit.
A split finger Hollywood
Who knew glamour felt this good?
Bloody static in one eye,
Oh what it's like lost in a lie.
Copyright ©
flirtyrockstar
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2003-07-14 04:05:00]
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Re: Split Finger Hollywood
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by norm on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 10:40:09 AM AEST
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I don't know what your writing
but it sure reads elegantly |
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Re: Split Finger Hollywood
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by Daniel_jenkis23 on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:21:17 AM AEST
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i like the short verses... it has a nice style
overall i think it is a good poem, it really depicts partly what getting high feels like sometimes |
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