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the life of ladan and laleh bijani
Contributed by
maha_ak49
on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
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oh god,
how cruel are you,
you joined them,
made them suffer,
you created each with,
different thoughts and,
other aims,
you planted the seed,
of ever growing hope,
for them to part away,
how cheerish both were,
aiming a new epic of,
life,
it turned out a sudden,
tragic,
you love them more,
they never enjoyed life,
born together,
departed alone,
both were no more,
conjoined twins,as both turned,
angels.
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Re: the life of ladan and laleh bijani
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by Vampy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:16:59 AM AEST
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| Very nice & thoughtful... that was such a sad thing to see happen to them. |
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Re: the life of ladan and laleh bijani
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by Saira on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:45:39 PM AEST
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Nicely done. Good work!
Saira |
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Re: the life of ladan and laleh bijani
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by soul_je on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 12:24:07 PM AEST
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| A very good one dude. Fate is cruel. |
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