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Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
Contributed by
kangarose
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Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I knew of you twelve months ago,
The words still ring out so loudly,
Of how you said you loved me so,
Before we ever met,
I gave to you my heart,
I was so unsure,
Whether to meet or not.
So much joy ran through my heart,
With all the words you said,
I gave in to my inhibitions,
I gave in to all my walls,
You slowly crumbled all the barriers,
That I'd gradually put up..
Our first meeting was a pleasure,
It was something I didn't expect,
The love you gave came freely,
I could feel it in my heart.
We talked about our future,
How once things were said and done,
You'd move down here with me,
Our love would be united,
For always..
The months went by,
I still believed,
All your love was true,
That I was your only rose.
You went away overseas,
It's something you needed to do,
You asked me to wait for you,
I waited all the while.
Along the way you'd promised things,
Not only just to me,
To a little eight year old boy,
But those promises came undone.
You hardly ever talk to me any more,
One minute your on here,
I go to utter words,
Before the words are out,
You're already gone.
Its like I am of no importance to you,
Just a toy to play with when ever you're bored,
Well I'm sorry babe,
I simply can't take this any more.
I'm guarding my heart much more carefully,
Even closer than before,
I've wrapped it up in cotton wool,
And all the barriers are back up.
I'll not let another man hurt me,
You see my heart is already broken in two,
I don't think you can begin to understand,
Just how much love this lady has for you.
I'll not call you on the phone again,
Maybe thats what drove you away,
I was only ever concerned dear,
I needed to know you were okay.
I'll not contact you on here dear,
To tell you what I've been doing,
I'll not be concerned of your health,
Or say hello when your on.
I'll always love you deeply and truely,
But the fact now is from you to me,
The love between the two of us is dead.
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 11:41:08 PM AEST
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Such a sad poem, Kangarose... hope you find some consolation....
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by Vampy on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 11:46:50 PM AEST
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| This was so sad... sorry that you have to go through such pain, but you seem like you're a strong person... at least you are strong enough to end it & most people can't do that. |
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:03:25 AM AEST
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This poem is dealing with a real issue
facing it, reasoning with it and laying it out
for you and me to learn from the poets direct feelings.
It is the caring which comes before devotion and loyalty
being sought out from lover who isn't really there. |
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by venkat on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:55:52 AM AEST
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| very sad .. really heart touching. venkat...venkat |
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:53:37 AM AEST
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so much sadness...but a descision I am sure did not come easy...very good write
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:46:55 PM AEST
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this is a very good write, sounds like your taking care of yourself and protecting
that child. thats so important for the both of you. good work Crow |
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by dragon on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 07:15:46 AM AEST
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This is very heart touching an i know its true i can tell, we all have had our hearts broke but i think the way urs was broke is the worst, im so sorry but hang in there, things might change
thanks for sharing this
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Re: Love Between The Two Of Us IS Dead
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:51:42 PM AEST
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good write kangarose - just as well you found out he was a jerk sooner than later -
sometimes we want to believe in love and are willing to risk our hearts, and that's when we are most vulnerable - I suppose the same goes for the guys - anybody can get burned in the game of love
un beso
merry |
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