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The Call
Contributed by
dafremen
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Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
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The Call
r. dafremen
It's a song to you
A longing touch upon your leaves
Becomes a part of you
For you to be a part of me
Then wraps my arms around your soul
To brush my face against your green
And be complete
It's a miracle
A call that echoes from the heart
Into the ever blue
Into that each and every part
A calm inviting masterpiece
A lifetime's searching come undone
Revealing everything
Concealing everyone
Heed the call
Why can't we heed the call
Of distant brothers?
Gently lean on one another?
Hear the call
Echo til the end of time
Not waking
Walking in a heavy slumber
Oblivious one of the other
Longing unbeknownst
Cold loving water on our minds
A feeling feeds upon itself
In everything and nothing else
To bring the circle round
To make a man out of me
And with a reverence
Bordering on blasphemy
Each one calls unto the other
Irresistably.
Copyright ©
dafremen
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2003-07-13 22:05:00]
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Re: The Call
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 11:04:08 PM AEST
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lovely
Shari |
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Re: The Call
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by Vampy on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 11:43:31 PM AEST
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Wonderful ;)
I enjoyed reading this one... some of the words you used just pull you right in... this flowed very nicely. |
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Re: The Call
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 11:56:32 PM AEST
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Lovely poem...wise words..
Jenni |
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Re: The Call
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by pacific on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 01:38:53 AM AEST
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| Nicely written piece. |
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Re: The Call
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 01:47:02 AM AEST
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Distant brother bordering blasphemy
has conjured with such wonderous wording
invocations charged with miraculous moulding.
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Re: The Call
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:05:01 AM AEST
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| I too enjoyed the words.Found them to be rather stimulating for the mind...A most definately well written piece! :) |
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Re: The Call
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:01:10 AM AEST
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| Wonderfully written ... Jan |
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Re: The Call
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:24:43 PM AEST
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| i can read so much from this, Crow |
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