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Untitled poem
Contributed by
azzouz
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Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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by the end, you're coming back
no matter how far you'd go
neverless how much you saw
by the end, you're coming back
exhausted with your depression
driven by the wheels of regretion
by the end, you're coming back
not for you've missed someone
but because you couldn't be for anyone
that's why i saw you coming back
i saw the tears in your eyes
no one believed you over the lies
and i saw you coming back
i didn't know what u've been up to
or was there someone you could run to?
is that why you're coming back?
i was worried about you, did u care??
been anxious all the time,did u dare???
and i saw you coming back
i don't know why i'm still holding on
when over it...i should be moving on
do i still have feelings for you?
or is it your ghost? or is it you?
i don't know anymore what's right or wrong
your behavior, you made me lost for a time long
still i want you back or not?
can't control it, case of a nutt...
i lay everyday to seek some rest
and i see you chasing me, not the rest
you torture me and push me into your cave
you cease my freedom till i become your slave
i lost my identity, i forgot who am i
my life has just ended, i just wana die
maybe this way, i will get rid of you
and certainly stop you from coming back.
Copyright ©
azzouz
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2003-07-13 16:05:00]
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Re: Untitled poem
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by EyesRustedShut on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:28:57 PM AEST
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| Let me be the first to comment on your poem, very nice, it seems like a song moreso than a poem.... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com |
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Re: Untitled poem
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:25:26 PM AEST
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| very good write Crow |
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Re: Untitled poem
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 02:23:55 AM AEST
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| An interesting poem, but good non the less, keep it up. |
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Re: Untitled poem
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by gina on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 03:38:47 PM AEST
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tsk tsk tsk,sad poem :( but why untitled! there r number of titles that goes with this poem , but i cant name any sowwee :P
thats a good one ,but stopping her from coming back mmm sa3beh !:P she cant but to follow u coz u r ...khalas leh 3am ehbela ana ,3an jadd ktir 7elweh l poem ,keep it up my friend,and how abt if u take this "busy " off ur status and talk :@ |
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