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Tearing Thorns

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Haunted eyes and saddened heart,
release she prays from tearing thorns.

No gallant knight to move her soul,
solitary nights, periled dreams.

Her thoughts turn back,
the tears are born.

Words that break, shatter,
and fall away, veils of black
need cast aside.

To love again? her heart unsure.. Crow





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Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 03:34:30 PM AEST
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very good write, but tell your friend if not the chance she takes, true love will not her way make

Shari


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:00:20 PM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written.
Saira


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:17:46 PM AEST
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So sad, yet so beautifully written...
Jenni


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampy on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:19:46 PM AEST
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You've portrayed the sadness of your friend very well in this piece... I like it, very beautiful ;)


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Dr_Calm on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:23:11 AM AEST
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Crow,

Very nice! It is so difficult to see wonderfully nice female friends suffer through trying to find someone special.

I wrote a song called "Love Is A Gamble" this is the fourth verse....

You can choose not to gamble,
Keep your emotions safe inside.
You can bet everything you got,
Or you can choose to hide.
But wining or loosing,
Is better than never knowing.
Go ahead and place a bet,
Love is the best game going

I think that is what your friend has to remember, it is better to take a shot, then at least you know where you stand, than to kick yourself for never finding out what might have been.

Jeffrey


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:46:59 AM AEST
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she`s a sweetie, i hope she does find that guy. Crow


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:15:49 AM AEST
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I think so, she needs to get out and take a chance. thats a nice verse! Crow


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:17:28 AM AEST
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thank you for looking, and the kind words Crow


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:22:45 AM AEST
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thank you, she will come around, just doesen`t want to get hurt again. Crow


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:23:57 AM AEST
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Many times these words would have been my hearts voice...I have learnt to trust again yes..but its a very hard thing to do...To give trust when you have none.Still,it's all part of life and part of living it to the fullest.Pain ,happiness,tears of both laughter and sorrow....all paint the pages of our journeys book...Best of love to your friend...Very deep write.. :)


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:29:22 AM AEST
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thank you, its a bit sad she needs to find someone. Crow


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:55:02 AM AEST
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beautiful
michelle


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-P-M-Devenish on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:25:01 PM AEST
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I really loved this poem.
Best wishes from
kay


Re: Tearing Thorns (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:56:15 PM AEST
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very beautifully written...it can be so hard to put your heart on the line when you are huritng like this..best pf luck to you and your friend...i hope love is found once more for her...
hugs
kara




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